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Cnc if you will :3
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all good.
but the light is too strong. just reduce i a bit:D but you can also add some flow on the first one.
btw nyc work dude.
Too much Bright.
As has been said before it's too bright but you also need to work on your blending and creating a focal. Read a few lighting tutorials as well. Really not a good idea to but a huge bright light directly on your focal as in your second one.
The composition is good, just the focal that's lacking immensely.
Too much bright :S
but its good 7.5
Too Bright:cool:
I understand the concept you intended, but it doesn't blend well. What makes a good signature is the blending, because you don't want it to look pasted on.
It's too bright, and next time when looking for a render, try to find one that you can put a sense of depth, onto so it looks 3-D, not a 2-D figure.
Everything is messy, and needs to be planned out, so it won't look messy.
I suppose you put effort, and actually tried, so that shows you have determination.
