Gothica

Found a psd somewhere on the forum, don't really know where though and I can't find it either. So big thanks for who ever posted the psd!

http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...ed/Gothica.png

Not bad for me, but I feel like it's missing that special something that would make it an awesome sig. So C&C please. Maybe you can point it out.

You need some more cool effects in this.
Erase the effects in the face of the girl... also I would change the text.
Keep working at it

(BTW:
PSD from Nexx.... from the PSD swapping treath?)

Yep, that's the one I think. So thanks Nexx:)
And thanks cs4pro, I'll make a 2nd version. Really feel like this has potential.
Though it make take while, I'm really busy lately.

np Provided! You did way better with it than i did..lol

That text could really help it i think. pick a more gothic font

i agree about more effects..something with a color that compliments this and still have that goth look. I'm feeling this one...just a few tweaks needed i think. Great job bud!:D

Swapping PSDs was a good idea After all!;)

nice work the brush or c4d in the left corner is to much i think
maybe some nice brushes on the back ground and its nice :P

greetz

Centered focal ><

Put more effort into the contrast and the lighting of the tag, that's what would make this piece interesting.

V2:
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/y...d/Gothica2.png
Added some lighter c4d and followed the tips. Was struggling a bit with the text, though it seems fine now. C&C is much appreciated.
This is my best work so far I think. Great feeling:)

Looks Better than Before. Good Work!