Temari Three Stars wallpaper <Radillac>

Yah, watch out, if you see the third star you're finished ^u^

http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/4...hreestarsw.png

Bumps.

It's pretty great, but the text is rather hard to read.

Hmmm. not liking this man:/ your lighting is all over the place, the composition needs a lot of work as well as your blending. Try not to use renders when doing wallpapers or large art, you've basically just did here what you would do in a sig. Its large art, experiment! :)

Why should I not use renders?

Yeah I'm not good at making walls/lp's, this is my fifth or something.

Might have blended the text a litte to much ^u^

uhm its ok..if this is 1 of your first large arts, then its pretty good...but as said, try to stay away from renders, they are too unoriginal...large arts are where your originality SHOULD be key, keep that in mind!!, also as said the lighting is off, check that out, and maybe fix it to experiment..i like the flow on this, and there is a clear focal which is nice, but its not very original, but keep goin mayne, be more original!!! :):)

Fack you scribble:D(Not being serious, i love you:D)
Great piece IMO
Love the scene here, Being attacked by C4d's or something

Keep it coming

Thanx, define originality please. I'm having a hard time figuring out the meaning of it :)

hmm lets see if i can help out here

originality is...anything

...anything different. ;)

Aight thought it meant keeping it old school, like back to the roots.

I've heard that my Dragon Tech sig is original :p

Thanks for letting me know.