Hey everyone. :) Here's a Dante tag I made in the last hour, looking for some critique. Also, I would also love it if someone could help me in ways a mentor would, to point me in the right direction.
is the thing in front of dante a C4D or jus a paint? make it to 70% opacity :)
Try to smudge dante a little bit so that It'll blend on the bckground.
I like ur sig! Keep it up! :)
01-17-2010, 11:31 PM
-MM.Kritez
you have some nice effects mate, but they could use some improvement.
lighting is correct, but could be alittle stronger. it looks like you tried to make some depth, but it might be better with a nice stock behind it.
the next needs to have the belevel and emboss off of it and be moved closer to the render (rule of thirds).
If you ever need any help with a tag feel free to PM and i will be willing to give you some tips.
-Kritez
01-17-2010, 11:34 PM
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shultz:it's actually brushwork, and I tried playing around to lower the opacity but i have so many applied images in this it's impossible to get it the same way with that part changed lol.
kritez: for the text, it's actually not beveled or embossed, it's a gradient. and I agree that it needs to be closer now. The background didn't turn as well as i hoped it would, and yes, a nice stock
would go perfect in this.
Seems that you love that style of brushes:)
it's pretty cool, but there's a lack of flow.
The white effects are cool, but make every effect a little smaller so there's more to look at.
Render looks a bit LQ, might just be me.