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It looks a bit too pretty for the subject matter you've chosen. I'd have gone with something more impacting. Something darker and more foreboding. In cases such as this, since I do a lot of commercial work that has a 'social conscience' message to it, I find that it's more about the message than the overall design.
I see what you mean Thanks for posting.