Dream

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/c...eeks/Sig2a.png
First, the positioning. I'm kinda stuck with it at the edge. Since move it an inch there's a strait edge all the way down.

Second, my obligation for using the stock.

reiko-stocks
stock

Critiques welcomed.

Any suggestions?

The render needs to stand out some more.
The whole sig is very bright and it looks like everything has a low opacity.
Try to fix that.
Also I would like to see some more effects. Use some c4d's to make them.

Look up at some tuts here on the void to improve your skills.
Keep It Up ;)

as Cs4pro said, also keep the focal clean. stripes, dots etc make a face dirty.

what they said lol, i do like the colours, they are easy on the eyes.

Thanks, I was trying to go for a foggy, dream like state.

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/c...eeks/Sig2b.png

Working on removing the rest of the dots, though the layer is being picky.

i'd say this is defintly an improvement, the vocal is alot clearer and certainly draws more attention to it.

Looks Better than before for sure;)
BUt u should add some c4ds for sure like cs10 pro said

I'll try adding a C4D to it but I'm not very good with those. Could someone link me to a tutorial the explains basic ways to use them?