Okay, basically, I need advice.

Hello~!

I just joined. Isn't that awesome?

Basically, I'm posting here to ask for advice. I'm attempting to make a signature that's different from all of my other pieces, because of it's simplicity and because I'm using a stock of a real person for the first time. I really don't want to mess up, so I'll link a screenshot of the PSD here, and if you spot anything horrible let me know.

Also! Okay. I really need to add a few lines of tinytext here, but I'm so undecided as to where the best place would be. Please give me your thoughts and suggestions.

Screenie.

I finished! Perhaps someone can tell me what they think.

http://i48.tinypic.com/28ui6m9.png

this could be alot better :) maybe change your whole sig start from scratch. check out some tuts on the void they will help u with render placement and stuff. good luck hope to see new version

ohhh i forgot to say use the same render :)