Scorpion

New sig :D CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...fat/pav23-.png

new one again, your realy going at it :P

i have some small things to note
1: at the top of his head, you can see the sig ending rather abruptly, like its chopped of.
2: even tho his head and the katana on his back are sticking out of the canvas, his shoulder/arm isnt, so that looks a little odd to me.
3: i think you should try and make the border go over his legs at the bottom.

if you'd fix those things i think it would look more like he's popping out of the canvas, instead of being pasted on to it.

All that Sparda has mentioned :rolleyes:

I would remove his face from the sword because it's only confusing.

Move the text closer to Scorpion, it shall be a part of the focal.

The end of the pen tooling is a little wrong, at the tip of the sword it shall go behind the sword in order follow the right pattern. You also have a issue at the middle of the sword. It shall be over, under, over, under and so on...

Maybe change the color of the lines or make it a clip mask.

Fix those issues and you will have a decent signature ;)

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Originally Posted by Sparda

new one again, your realy going at it :P

i have some small things to note
1: at the top of his head, you can see the sig ending rather abruptly, like its chopped of.
2: even tho his head and the katana on his back are sticking out of the canvas, his shoulder/arm isnt, so that looks a little odd to me.
3: i think you should try and make the border go over his legs at the bottom.

if you'd fix those things i think it would look more like he's popping out of the canvas, instead of being pasted on to it.

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the render is like that :confused: i can fix the head but the arm is like that...

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Originally Posted by RadillacVIII

All that Sparda has mentioned :rolleyes:

I would remove his face from the sword because it's only confusing.

Move the text closer to Scorpion, it shall be a part of the focal.

The end of the pen tooling is a little wrong, at the tip of the sword it shall go behind the sword in order follow the right pattern. You also have a issue at the middle of the sword. It shall be over, under, over, under and so on...

Maybe change the color of the lines or make it a clip mask.

Fix those issues and you will have a decent signature ;)

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kk ill try...

well i guessed it cant be helped if the render is that way by itself :P