Smudge

http://i46.tinypic.com/141mbs8.png

Not bad, I actually like this. But it's a bit boring. :D A coloured version would be nice :)

Thanks i'll get onto it!

http://i47.tinypic.com/1zxpkle.png

dam lovin the second version the first wasn't anything to brag about, but that second one is hot. good job.

And as for colored version you just reversed the colors >u<

I like the first version better, has a metallic feeling to it.

But add some colors here and there to spice it up.

Paint some dots with a regular brush then smudge em some.

bw does not go well with smudges, doesn't make it stand out. i think it be better if you posted the color version.

I like the smooth composition of the first version there mate. Its a bit boring but its still a good piece.