http://www.twofivedesigns.com/portfolio/808.jpg
http://twofivedesigns.com/portfolio/life.jpg
http://twofivedesigns.com/portfolio/usoa.jpg
http://twofivedesigns.com/portfolio/dfs.jpg
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Looking very good.
Solid professional feel, not real suggestions.
Keep it up.
i like that quote "why think that the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"
nice work here!! indeed prof looking!
looks solid, i would comment a bit here.
The flyer for Life club looks a little unrealistic because the word "CARD" is set on transparency and i can spot purple city lights through ti. fix that. Glamorous touch can be attained by adding extra layers of lights on top of the text. A lens flare will do a good job, but that wil be tough on printing.
The other thing on flyer is that, the text "Each and every thursday" looks random, i think its because of its placement. The other objects look organized except that. Try fitting it with the text VIP CARD.
The last one DFS Entertainment, the logo, looks weird, becasue at one point of the revolution, the word DFS is repeated twice. that breaks the rhythm. It might have happened because of the space allotment imo. Fix that and you are good to go,
other than that its pretty tough job.
KIU
