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I just love your concepts, and ideas. They are always appealing to my eyes, but this one could use some more touch ups. The cut out of the render looks a little choppy, so you should smoothen it to create a better illusion of depth. Try lowering the opacity of the text, and it would look a little better.
ok thanks :)
The blending on the big woman needs a little work as tator said. I would do a little tweaking to the blending of that, and maybe tweak the coloring of some of it. I like the greenish stars but they take away from the focal points.
ok then
You have good creativity but your execution in parts is way off.