Cry me a River

I was actually really disapointed in this piece. I thought this was a great idea but it didn't turn out the way i wanted it to.
http://i49.tinypic.com/5unwj7.png

Typography needs a bit of work >.>

THe girly needs colourmatching better with the pic too. Otherwise it's not too shabby.

I hate that. When you have such a good idea in your head, but it just doesnt translate.
Its all good, sometimes you just have to go with it.
The idea is there, but as you said not quite executed. There could be alot of emotion in the picture, but it just isnt there yet.
Just keep it up.

since you already know its not too good, and above comments say everything, i would give you a tip of advice

I just saw that you submitted 3 pieces in the time interval of 4 hours. You might think thats a feat to achieve :p but lemem tell you, instead of making so many artworks in small intervals, give all that time to a single piece and make it the best
As they say Quality is important than Quantity.

Instead of giving an hour to every piece give 3 hours to 1 piece and see the change. Try to reduce minor mistakes.

ok :)