Apocalypse

http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/a...apocalypse.png

Trying to do photo manipulation..
CnC please!

I can't give too much advice, but the 2 main things that need work is the text, which is hard to read, and those cracks, at least I think thats what they are supposed to be. They look fake and drawn on after the fact. If they are supposed to be on the buildings themselves, then keep an eye were the corner is, and the cracks should change accordingly. And making them flat black doesn't look right either.

thnx for the CnC!

I'll try to fix it next time! :D

bump 4 CnC !

meh... its just boring, mostly color wise.
the cracks dont look good... the top left one wouldnt work like that physically, at the corner of the building it would change directions again, not go down like that. same with the one below it. when you have a shape with depth to it, you have to take that into consideration when you're adding fx to it
its too melancholy for an apocolypse... idk just reminds me of... meh... idk... just boring... an apocolypse reminds me of chaos, fire, death, destruction, oblivion, and other scary words like that...
this picture makes me think of what it would be like to work in an office building, with my own little cubicle... typing up paperwork... day.... after day... after day....