Where is the Crits bit?

As you can see im new here, where can i showcase my work for crits etc,
anyways ive just put this quicki together, somthing not right about it :/
crits pl0x ?
http://i50.tinypic.com/2lsxq9j.jpg

Thanks.

Hi i see ur a newcomer next time if you are posting sigs or avatars post the threads in here http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=43 the mods maybe will move this thread to Signatures and Avatars

Moved.