Vegeta

heey peepz this is my first sprite i didn't use'd anny tut
c&c plz and plz tel what i can change or add

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/1833/vegetaa.png

o.o nice try but... the flow is in the wrong way and the c4d's dont really go with the render and the font neither so yea... nice try but keep trying :D

tnx

can you tel me what i can change
so i can inprove my next sig

too boxy on top of the just barely pixelated sprite. the sprite is too out of focus when compared to the background, brings your eye away from the focus object. colors dont match...
and the focus object is like... half a centimeter too far to the left TT_TT if you're gonna put it in the middle, its gotta be in the middle or else it just looks sloppy. and is he smeared? it kinda looks like he's growing his hair out. sprites are too small to use that fx on.
not enough flow between the bg and the fg (background & foreground...) its just... a background; a foreground; and some light.... needs interest!
text needs work
background is too detailed to be opposing a sprite.

overall its good. i dislike sprite sigs tho, so my criticisms are gonna be hard :( sorry D:
i like the bg, it looks good, just not for this.
to a passerby, it doesnt look half bad, but when you take 5+ seconds to look at it, you notice everything.

since its your first tho, you did an amazing job :)

8/10 ^.^ keep up the good work :D

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Originally Posted by gr4ph1kP4ND4

too boxy on top of the just barely pixelated sprite. the sprite is too out of focus when compared to the background, brings your eye away from the focus object. colors dont match...
and the focus object is like... half a centimeter too far to the left TT_TT if you're gonna put it in the middle, its gotta be in the middle or else it just looks sloppy. and is he smeared? it kinda looks like he's growing his hair out. sprites are too small to use that fx on.
not enough flow between the bg and the fg (background & foreground...) its just... a background; a foreground; and some light.... needs interest!
text needs work
background is too detailed to be opposing a sprite.

overall its good. i dislike sprite sigs tho, so my criticisms are gonna be hard :( sorry D:
i like the bg, it looks good, just not for this.
to a passerby, it doesnt look half bad, but when you take 5+ seconds to look at it, you notice everything.

since its your first tho, you did an amazing job :)

8/10 ^.^ keep up the good work :D

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ty mate for the critism(or how u spel it)
yes this is my first sprite and im stil noob at every thing
i wil make another tomorrow or tonight
im not good on effect's (ectualy i suck at it)
i cant find anny good sprite tuts so i was messing around by my self
i need a teacher :P maybe some one gots interest in a aprentis ;)

tnx again for crithics

Its kinda nice actually...

just try to work on your background and txt :P

KIU

yeah. improve on ur bakground.
nyc sprite tag.
want a good teacher on sprites ask chonfat.
GJ on the sig tho.