Warrior Princess

CnC!:)

http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/q...08/Warrior.png

Good flow, but the colors are monotone and the light source distracts too much. As for the text, go with simple fonts, fancy ones just tend to distract aswell.

Yea Ive been having a bit of a problem with the monotone lately..Trying to get it right it mess me up every time. :(

the bg is a bit boring. better to keep it more empty imo. i kind a like the text. it goes nice with the focal, so i don't agree with kotora on that, but that's just my opinion. :)

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Originally Posted by shiv96

Yea Ive been having a bit of a problem with the monotone lately..Trying to get it right it mess me up every time. :(

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Just play around with hue/lighting/gradients/selective color etc, etc. You need to spend as much time on adjustments as you did with effects.

put the white light behinddddd her head so that it accents her face rather than washing it out....
whats with that white line? its like.... groping her boob.... gahhh weird... anywho i think rather than having that halo of light above her head, you should use another one of those white lines around it to bring that theme back into the picture more than once.

i love the background, and its a great choice of colors
text is interesting, not something i've seen before, i like it :)