http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/5061/svosonic2.png
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wow this is very very busy tag man i like what u did with your name trying ti hide it but it still stands out toooo much and sonic should be your focal point in this not the effects its a nice start but still needs cleaning up oh yeah i like the rounded edges lol
pretty much what underoath said.
the flow is all over the place, your focal in practically hidden under the lightnings and the lightnings are too often. It's too bright and I dont like the rounded edges..
gj tho
http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/999...nisherfixu.png
not really sure this did the trick ... i didnt want to change too much about it since i really want to exhibit that much lightning. Did some lighting and blur on it ... maybe a little too much blur, faded out the name a bit more
render is too hidden by the thunder and the flow is everything but yet dosnt look that bad but of course v.2 better :D
thx guys ^^ i might work a bit more on it later on but i kinda wanted the render to be encased in lightning like that ... guessi sohuld do a better job at it. In time ill single out my flow