Good smudging, but it's too plain. It needs more.
Text needs work.
02-23-2010, 04:15 AM
keden
Plain how? I mean I've tried a multitude of effects but they all ended up being so incredibly busy that it was giving me a headache just to look at it.
And yeah the text I can understand.. Frankly I wish I didn't have to add it but how would you know it's mine then! What would be suggested for this one? Make it stand out more or blend it differently?
02-23-2010, 05:04 AM
Provided
I would place the text closer to the the render. Scale it down, use a different font and try playing with colors and effects. But that's me, we all have our different style.
By too plain I mean it's just the smudging to look at. Try adding some other stuff like C4D or something.
Also I just noticed that the black border color doensn't really suit the sig. Try using some dark brown or if it is, making it a bit lighter.
02-23-2010, 05:34 AM
keden
Okay thank you very much Provided, appreciate it! I'll post a revised version some time soon and see if I can blow you away with that instead :P