Taylor Swift

http://i46.tinypic.com/2i8ez50.png

Its not my best I know but thought to improve?

looks pretty cool, but it seems to be the render doesnt realy blend all that well with the background,
i also think you should move the text someplace closer to the render.

as sparda said, the render doesnt blend in with the background and the text is too far away/packed in a corner.

agree with sparda