Take Cover!

Cnc please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...nfat/pav36.jpg

hmmmm nothing bad to say about it ... but maybe try putting the text somewhere under his arm? like between his arm the gun nozzle? cuz i think it distracts attention being all the way at the bottom

Not liking how the explosion just stops and doesn't show at all from the middle down. Also, smudge the edges of the render to blend it with the background.

we should take cover

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Originally Posted by Svoloch

hmmmm nothing bad to say about it ... but maybe try putting the text somewhere under his arm? like between his arm the gun nozzle? cuz i think it distracts attention being all the way at the bottom

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kk ill try to move the text somewhere

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Originally Posted by Karter

Not liking how the explosion just stops and doesn't show at all from the middle down. Also, smudge the edges of the render to blend it with the background.

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kk ill try to move the explosion and ill also try to blend the render up

nice sig man, only thing i'd like to note is that i think the text below the "Take cover"
is somewhat hard to read, and a bit unnessesary i think.

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Originally Posted by Sparda

nice sig man, only thing i'd like to note is that i think the text below the "Take cover"
is somewhat hard to read, and a bit unnessesary i think.

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really? i think it gives it a nice touch :D but here is v.2 with the smude so it blends up i think o.o
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...at/pav36-1.jpg