Liquified

Ohayo minnasan! << japanese ahahah

well this is just a test for my new nike poster. Not complaining about crappy pc but i wanted to make a print ready poster for myself so i was making it, but somehow, 300 PPi CMYK is not my pc's choice. Well to be honest i am not kinda happy with the outcome, but finally good news is i am getting a tablet next month. Yosh *runs aroundi n circles*

Ah there are other news too, we are house shifting tomorrow, so no internet for a week atleast. So this will be the last one before shifting. You can say thats the reason for my inactivity. Too much luggage to pack :@

Size will be huge [2400x2284(I cropped later on thus 2284)] ,so bear with it, because as i told you i wanted a print ready poster but sice pc cant handle cmyk 300, i did it in rgb 300, do you think i can still print it?

Well dont worry, i will make a nike poster similar to these so keep a weather eye
hah hah hah -arrogant laugh-
nothing more to say

http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2635/liquified.jpg
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2635/liquified.jpg

got some good stuff going but some parts that are liquified seems unnecessary, kiu.

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Originally Posted by prj.sober

got some good stuff going but some parts that are liquified seems unnecessary, kiu.

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agree, you slightly overdone it. for instance keep the horizontal line straight, that way get contrast between liquify and the real world..
also it is too large.. wich makes it impossible to see it... everybody is going to make it smaller to see it anyway so why so large??

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Originally Posted by Xelo

agree, you slightly overdone it. for instance keep the horizontal line straight, that way get contrast between liquify and the real world..
also it is too large.. wich makes it impossible to see it... everybody is going to make it smaller to see it anyway so why so large??

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same thing goes for me and i prefer 1440x900 :p

I think the blending could use work on. The liquified parts looked nice and shizzle but in some areas, it looks LQ so work on that.

I'm not a fan of the C4D effects either.

Not your best but KIU. I liked the concept I saw here but it need a better compo.

first of all thank you all for comments and critiques. now i know if i would have keep it small it would have looked better, but it seems someone here doesnt read artists comments
i think i said that i wanted a print ready poster thats why the size is so huge :)

well another thing is this is just a test poster, what i am going to print for me is going to be better than this :D

Meh, good execution but its all been done before , and what kyle said is correct