Cloud

Trying new things... first time doing "splatter" so yea... CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...nfat/pav38.jpg

Ease down with the sharpening, also another tip, when sharpening, only do it with the focal, helps to bring depth.

I dont know what u did but looks like its to in depth so ya

needs more depth and less light from above
text needs lots of work, it's too bold and it needs a simples font imo
gj tho

well yea. ^just wt the guys on top said^
easy on the sharpening.
and the light is strong.
and blur the sword a bit.
it attracts my eyes instead of cloud. IMO
and text needs tweaking a bit.
other than that GJ on the sig.
keep working at it.

kk thx everybody :D

It's not bad, but there are a few problems:

-The text sticks out more than the focal point does.
-The lighting is inaccurate and it's too bright as well.
-The tag altogether lacks depth.

If you fix the problems, your tag should look a lot better.

agree with Jool
Also I would remove the duplicated text under the normal text.

Keep at it ;)

It isn't bad, but it is very messy. It sorta looks like you've just put some random effects on and they have distracted he flow and colors. Also blur the background to give some more depth. kiu

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Originally Posted by Jool

It's not bad, but there are a few problems:

-The text sticks out more than the focal point does.
-The lighting is inaccurate and it's too bright as well.
-The tag altogether lacks depth.

If you fix the problems, your tag should look a lot better.

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kk... my text does suck... with brigtness ill repair that and how do i add depth?

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Originally Posted by cs4pro

agree with Jool
Also I would remove the duplicated text under the normal text.

Keep at it ;)

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kk thx bro

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Originally Posted by ShorterGFX

It isn't bad, but it is very messy. It sorta looks like you've just put some random effects on and they have distracted he flow and colors. Also blur the background to give some more depth. kiu

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kk thx bro