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Stop War text Wallpaper
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03-01-2010, 02:43 PMD4rK3NStop War text Wallpaper
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03-01-2010, 03:05 PMcC.ShorterGFX
I like it. A design like this is hard to accomplish. My only advice is to try keep it all within the lines. kiu
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03-01-2010, 03:46 PMshiv96
Very Nice
Must have been hard to align all the text to look like a gun..:)
Good Work Dark ;) -
03-02-2010, 12:33 AMSoap
It's a good idea, but needs a lot of work.
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03-02-2010, 05:56 AMXeloQuote:
Originally Posted by Soap
if you think it needs work, then say what kind off work it needs!!!
to just say that it needs work is a shitty and useless comment!!
i think it is perfect the way it is.:D -
03-02-2010, 08:44 AM+s9.Oath
very nice man how you got the full shotgun shapen and the trigger good work man
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03-02-2010, 10:03 AMSoapWhat you think is irrelevant. It is incorrectly done.Quote:
Originally Posted by Xelo
And telling them what needs to be corrected isn't always a lesson in learning
leaving them to figure it out for themselves can be far more instructive.
Text is misaligned and is, in places, forced just to make the shotgun shape.
In other places he's not correctly sized the type so that two small lines of text fit nicely next to one big line, what is left is a mismatch of typesize.
Not well done. needs work.
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03-02-2010, 12:28 PMflatty
Cool piece here:)
Some weird texts in there though:p I Like the bigger/smaller contents in it, and the shotgun is well done
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03-02-2010, 03:28 PMD4rK3N
Soap : Your right ! Thanks i will practice it ! :-) Thank you
All: Thanks you so much :-) for you opinion i really respect it ! :-) -
03-02-2010, 05:49 PMSoapThe secret (and about 1% of the people who make these pieces I have seen know this secret) is to make a completely coherent sentence, reading from left to right as normal in your given shape. Therein lies the magic of your typographical piece.Quote:
Originally Posted by D4rK3N
