CnC: How Could I Have Improved This?

Hey guys
How could I have improved this signature:

Original Render:[spoiler] http://planetrenders.net/renders/alb...al_gundam5.png[/spoiler]

V1 signature: [spoiler]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/1593/gundaml.png[/spoiler]

Thanx guys

I would change the red sig version to blue instead, thou blue is more metalic and robotic.

On the LP I would add some vector brushes and shapes.

You're doing great so far, keep polish them ;)

Btw spoiler codes is not supported here ;)

Hahaa ya i noticed and ok thank you for the help.
Im going to upload version 2 later today

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Originally Posted by Valkyr

Hey guys
How could I have improved this signature:

Original Render:[spoiler] http://planetrenders.net/renders/alb...al_gundam5.png[/spoiler]

V1 signature: [spoiler]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/1593/gundaml.png[/spoiler]

Thanx guys

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V2: Guys

This better or worse?
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/7731/gundamv2.png

in version 3 im thinking of makign the moon white and the gunfire maybe like white too

red was >
IMO

id loose the cirlcles and the lines, if you are using colorized hue/satch, don't. id throw a few gradient maps, and some channel mixers instead, and I'd go for more of cyan type color, cuz thats way too dark imo.

the dept on your piece is really nice, so the darker color doesn't really compliment the shadows.

alright thnx-- what could i do to make it not look as empty?