Fear my power!

i know... bit monotone but hey if u looked at how it looked without the gradient map u would agree this looks better :D CnC please :D
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/h...nfat/pav49.png

Hmm, it's alright, not the best though. Your lighting is off, well, I assume that you made the ball of light yourself; if not, then the stock or render has two different light sources which is tricky to work with. The blending is okay, the black lines kind of make the whole thing look messy though. And the text could be done better, though, I'm pretty bad at text myself, so yeah. Other than that, it's good. You could probably tone down the monotone too, but yeah. Not trying to be harsh if it seemed like it, just trying to give some suggestions and point out a few things. Hope I helped.

yea man its all good :D and yea... we all fail at text now in days :D and those black lines suppostly were ment to look as black flames... without that gradient map they looked great :D well thx bro for the CnC :D

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Originally Posted by furbz

Hmm, it's alright, not the best though. Your lighting is off, well, I assume that you made the ball of light yourself; if not, then the stock or render has two different light sources which is tricky to work with. The blending is okay, the black lines kind of make the whole thing look messy though. And the text could be done better, though, I'm pretty bad at text myself, so yeah. Other than that, it's good. You could probably tone down the monotone too, but yeah. Not trying to be harsh if it seemed like it, just trying to give some suggestions and point out a few things. Hope I helped.

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This. Over-contrasted IMO.

^^^agreed.
Btw Chonfat I like it; but im kinda interested in seeing it w/o the gradient