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You should try a clipping mask on the text so that it doesnt pop out too much. And there is way to much unused space to the left.
too much negative space
and render dosent really blend in
hmmm this has potential. the first two version were way to dark. your third with the extra blue light is much better, but still to many black c4d's. sometimes less is more.