Sprite (3rd Try)

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6659/vegitasprite.png

Had a stressful day so decided to try making another sprite to chill out for a bit, what u guys think?

way toooo much going on in this one with 100 colors everywhere

something to try for next time man figure out the direction you want the tag to flow then add your effects and make them flow in that direction if you dont understand look at my bleach sprite or my jiggly puff sprite and you will see a direct flow in both of them :)

I like the colors, the render not so much.

Cheers for the replies guys, Any tips Underoath?