Lupe Fiasco

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8349/lupefiasco.png

The only thing missing is some bad ass text to complainant
the rest of the sig. Q.Q

Aye, Lupe is awesome, but you went overdrive with the effects, tone them down and make sure they flow with the render otherwise it just looks chaotic. Not to mentione the colors are all over the place, make use of the contrast/hue/saturation, etc etc adjustments, overall it looks rushed. :\

Well... I can't really see it cause I'm on my itouch but from here it looks great

Lupe is the only rapper I'll listen to so kudos for good music choice

Way to Messy
Your Whoring the Effects on this one
That Huge Text Brush/Text is Weird
You Kinda Overdid Everything really
Like Kot said the Colors are every where too
Not a Fan of this one
Keep at it;)

Q.Q Thank you everyone for your constructive criticism. I'll try and do better next time.

Man i know someone who use to do work like this and i think i have your text solution...

Bold white text that is somewhat close together looks great