simple tech animation

i made the reder in C4D


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/GaiaD/swirl.gif

The text is hideous. That's about all I can say.

Everything else looks good.

i dont like any of it at all im sorry to say!

I think it needs some editing on that one.
First of all, i think the animated border that opens is not going very smooth. And second i dont like the bottom left text you added. And, well if you want to keep the hioles on the border, make a glassy effect there, so that its not just a hole, doesnt looks really good.

Other than that, i really think that the font swirl fits really good, and the shining on the c4d render looks good too, it could be better ^^

ok, i'll probly make another

everything is hideous, if ya wana do some good tech anim, find some of oldebacks topics (hes not here anymore but hes AMAZING)