Been away since '07 but I'm back with a vengeance.

Starting a graphic design course soon and I need a portfolio put together for it. This is one of the pieces in my portfolio.

I'm looking for some heavy criticism because I'm using these for school, so don't hold back your nasty comments. I want as much criticism as possible and I want you to be like that shitty teacher everyone had when they were little. Mark all my works with ridiculous expectations.

Thanks

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e8...portfolio2.jpg

welcome back even tho idk you :D and that looks pretty much amazing :D and i like it in everyway

Thanks very much. Yeah I signed up here forever ago and completely forgot about the website, then I was looking for digital art forums on google and this was the third result and I was like HOLY CRAP that site is still on the go? Awesome!

Sorry dude, don't like it. This looks very messy and really bright down near the bottom which causes a focal distraction. You need to work on the smudging near the top as it looks very low quality. Also, the logo in the bottom left corner is a little distracting and isn't really needed.
Good look with the course dude.

The low quality smudging I blame on Photobucket resizing my image.

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Originally Posted by VooDooRex

The low quality smudging I blame on Photobucket resizing my image.

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Try Tinypic.com im pretty sure they dont resize pics.

What's with the yellow dot at the top?

You get an F!

The yellow dot at the top is from filters and effects being applied over one of the lights from the lens flare at the bottom.

Agreed With Shorter Here:)

it's fuckin shittttt! :p na jk man, haha. when doing abstract pieces, try not to give it a symmetrical effect, but rather go for a nice composition, as it can make or break an abstract a lot of te time. Work on colour choice, it's looking really dull and desaturated atm. I would recommend downloading adobe kuler to help with colour combos. the light source is really distracting here, also it's looking really chaotic at the bottom, I'm not really sure where to look. as for the smudging it needs to be cleaned up. although the general 3d work is well done, just work heavily on your postwork:)

I wish you the best of luck, where are you studying?