Apocalypse

http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/a...ypseMarvel.png

ThoughtS?

me thinks is nice, but focal is tad to much hidden.

i agre with xelo but nice fxs

thanks

Nice Fx
The Focals Blends in too Much in this one
Text is nice
Overall Nice Work:)

P.S: Damn You Tag Whore....I think you make 300000000000000000 tags a day:D hOLY cRAp!

haha! thanks :)

really nice tag.
text could use some work, but all in all a great piece.

I don't think the focal is defined enough. I think the effects are more interesting and take up more a role as a focal then the image itself. I think you should tidy up the effects a little as it's quite busy and bring it Apocalypse more.

Text could use a little work too, with it being white, it stands out to much. Try experimenting with some clipping masks maybe?

I quite like the effects, just a bit too many in my opinion. Like the colour too.

Hope to see a version 2. Keep at it. :)

nice dude !! love the flow and the efx GJ :)