Julian Casablanca

So I'm pretty bad at this sig making business :)

http://i662.photobucket.com/albums/u...kk/Julian2.jpg

Stage 2:

http://i662.photobucket.com/albums/u...Untitled-2.jpg
C+C appreciated greatly :P

hi there! i enjoy this one, the only thing imo that should be worked on is the brushing especially onthe left side. and the building and stuff it looks to me like it should all be blended into one the text actually looks good where its at, however when you have such a plain area in a sig such as on the left, you kind of want to make that look full so it doesnt take away from the focal point(your render) als well though i do enjoy it and keep at it!!

looks ok but its lacking flow and blending imo. kiu :)

try blending the render in a bit. the stuff behind the render is looking good. KIU im sure u can make this one look good :)

Messed about with it a bit more, better/worse? :/

it looks better!! the focal im assuming his face, should stand out more what i like to do is sharpen, burn and dodge around the border of my focal, like ill sharpen the edge and burn around is so it looks like it darkens the place behind him kind of makes it stand out a little more.. all in all i do like it.