Lupe Fiasco Sig

first sig in a looong time, threw it together in about an hour or so
background really lacking i know lol, just getting a feel for photoshop again :)
http://i41.tinypic.com/2mm9vo1.jpg

well i dont even know where to start.
first, only use on focal
that huge line is ugly
work on text
and i cant even tell what it is besides a pair of hands :(

read some tuts

well it comes from a music video, its the lining of his silhouette and then a bright light flashes. yea not the greatest idea for a sig lol
but ill be back with better much work. :)

i agree with skaryface .. but its a good effort KIU

Agreed With Skaryyyy Skary Skarryyy
Good Try though:)
Try Tuts
:)

i get the feel that you were goin for but i have to agree with skaryface. your focal is hardly visible and text is everywere. keep it up :)

got it :)