Ninja

The render is a little oversaturated due to the fact that it was almost plain white when i found it. CnC please :)

http://i44.tinypic.com/xqj39d.png

it needs to be sharpened.. wayyy to blurry

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Originally Posted by neocross

it needs to be sharpened.. wayyy to blurry

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thanks for the cnc

v2 the render is more sharpened
http://i43.tinypic.com/szvsi0.png

i feel it fades to black way too quick, no feeling the huge black empty space on the left.
try to move the text closer to the focal.

i think the blurryness looks kinda cool awesome job dude !

V1s better, but the render is kinda..indistinguishable. Maybe place the same render on top and erase the parts where you want the effects? Thats what i always do when my render is too blended.

pay no attention to scarry lol jk i only say that because having it fade out like that to the black ness to one side not many like that style but i do so no worries kiu m8

thanks everyone for the cnc :)

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Originally Posted by Liquid

The render is a little oversaturated due to the fact that it was almost plain white when i found it. CnC please :)

http://i44.tinypic.com/xqj39d.png

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Start off with a higher quality render or stock image first of all. having trouble finding a better render? try www.sneakybaron.com or www.planetrenders.net or even on this site in the resource section. As said above the text placement is bad, it is too far from your focal point and is being used to fill negative space. I would suggest just picking a higher quality render and using same sig psd, just try again with diff image. When you sharpen the render tho don't sharpen the entire thing, just the areas that you want to stand out, some areas of his body should be less sharp and blurred slightly. gl and nice idea.