IronMan

http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/a...nMancopy-1.png

~CnC~ Plox :)

I think you should put some more effects in rather than just the one or two fractals small fractals at the bottom, blur some of the buildings in the distance to create depth and maybe a gradient map or two and make the light source a bit more obvious? (At the moment it looks like the lights coming from the top left, but your trying to make it from the effects on the render (to me it does anyway:p))

A nice start but it looks unfinished :)

Original stock + Render i used...

http://radojavor.deviantart.com/art/...submarine&qo=0

http://planetrenders.net/renders/dis...h&cat=0&pos=16

i think i did enough to it theres about 25 layers...

I'm liking this so far, but I do agree with Krunch - it does look a little unfinished and I think you could make it better. :p The right side is brilliant. Love the effects, great placement and very well executed.

The left side however, is looking a bit plain. The background is nice and fits well and it's good that you've got it showing but I think just a small something is needed just to break the emptiness up.

I really like this piece either way though, great colours, amazing effects. Good job, keep it up. :)

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Originally Posted by Dom

I'm liking this so far, but I do agree with Krunch - it does look a little unfinished and I think you could make it better. :p The right side is brilliant. Love the effects, great placement and very well executed.

The left side however, is looking a bit plain. The background is nice and fits well and it's good that you've got it showing but I think just a small something is needed just to break the emptiness up.

I really like this piece either way though, great colours, amazing effects. Good job, keep it up. :)

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Thanks maybe i will go back into it and add some more effects on the left.

agree with dom

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Originally Posted by marioman77

Original stock + Render i used...

http://radojavor.deviantart.com/art/...submarine&qo=0

http://planetrenders.net/renders/dis...h&cat=0&pos=16

i think i did enough to it theres about 25 layers...

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I may be mistaken, but I am pretty sure that if you use a image from Deviantart you have to have permission from the creator to use their work in your pieces. Because the background you have in your sig is someone elses photoshop work, not a Royalty free Stock image for use by anyone. I may be wrong tho maybe someone who knows more about using Deviantart stuff can enlighten us.

Its better to ask for permission and give credit when making something and taking something from any1 in deviantart, but i dunno about brushes c4ds and whatnot ._.

Overall its an okay and good sig, could be better =3 if left was also done a bit better, depth more defined, but effects are good, lighting is also good as well. KIU