Ronaldo

1.
http://i324.photobucket.com/albums/k...s/ronaldo1.jpg


and another attempt
2.
http://i324.photobucket.com/albums/k...2ndattempt.jpg



C+C please and any tips for photoshop welcome :)

Nice try.

1st one: WAY Bad lett, Real Madrid symbol is bad renderized, no depth, just this x)

2nd one: Again, fail lett, fail ilu, those splatters was gotten better if with CM, but with those C4D it has just gotten a nice depth, just this =D

You need to masterize the lettering, that's one is horrible, and you your creativity in textures and other effects =D

thanks for that mate, i'll work on the lettering and i'm just trying to get used to using the different brushes and messing around with the different tools to get a feel for them. thanks for the comment =D.
whats ilu by the way?

edit:

http://i324.photobucket.com/albums/k...xtpractice.jpg


Lettering any better?