Dead space

http://i48.tinypic.com/5edfrt.jpg

http://i49.tinypic.com/107jrbp.jpg
cnc?

you should bring abit depth to hes head os the focal point you choose, and i'm not a fan of B&W so much, but nice text placing :)
GJ

Thanks for the comment.
Heres a colour version:
http://i49.tinypic.com/107jrbp.jpg
Not sure if it looks better or worse

Much better :)