Trying new things

Im trying new things I have not done B4. C&C Please.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y91...0Work/new1.gif

C&C Please

The focal is way too over contrasted(meaning it's damn near blinding). And you might also want to edit the colors of your cd4s to match the render's colors.

i like the flow but yeah i agree with bloodgod on the contrast