Another dead space tag

http://i47.tinypic.com/5ls32u.jpg
v2
http://i49.tinypic.com/ettydw.jpg
Cnc?

Bump >.<

looks good ) maybe need add some c4d effects or lighting source

Thanks for the comment.
The light source is in the sky in the background glaring on his shoulders from behind.
I used fractal effects, but didnt want to go too overboard like i usually do.

I like it its simple, maybe you should add some more dramatic lighting and maybe a tad more colour :) overall nice job i would current it if i was you, it's alot better than your current atm! :D

Thanks, il edit with what you said and update in a minute.

Here, took into account what you said:
http://i49.tinypic.com/ettydw.jpg

That looks much better :D good job :)