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the text is just baad :(
Killer93yo, if you have nothing constructive to post I suggest you don't post at all. Telling him that the text is just "baad" is in no way constructive and does not amount to proper criticism, something which most pepole tend to do and think they are actually helping that body.
I agree with Killer however, the text is overwhelming the focal and is way too noticeable. Not to mention it doesn't fit in with the rest of the tag. Make something that'll blend better with the tag's composition and way smaller. The tag has hints of contrast from comparing both sides but its overall monotonous. You don't want that in your sig. Make the colors contrast nicely so you must have a good color scheme. The lighting is good though but work on the other properties I noted out. Keep trying mate.
yeah lose the text.. dosent fit. also try adding sum depth and make it less monotone. Keep it up :D