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more smudge :D
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more smudge :D
floating face, and needs to be cleaned up imo. could do with some flow and sexy lightning. :)
The focal needs cleaning. The effect near the face is overtaking the focal. The contrast is too weak resulting in a monotonous look it needs more lighting. Keep at it!
its the floating head syndrome :)
Effects cover his face a little and should be cleaned up.
Colors are very dull.
Kepp trying at it and i think you'll get it right next time :)
