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Remove the text and the squares and rectangle. They drag attention aware. THe lighting is looking good but the edges of the render look too soft, so that means the blending didn't exactly work out. Effects from the left aren;t working either. There is no need for them to be soft mate. Blend the focal with the effects and not the effects into the focal.:) Good attempt. Keep trying!
i dont get it whats it got to do with Spiderman?
agree with takken .. keep it up dude :D