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my first apo peice in a while, pretty basic but i love the colors

text is ghastly, i couldnt get it right at all :( there are too amny colors to do it, so i did it green i may put on mah dA but i dont think i did too well on... so i probably wont

http://pix7.com/0505/3037_origin.jpg


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Wow, great job! Can't really complain on the render, it's very nice. I like that you centered the circle. Gives this kinda tribal effect. :P
The text is what bothering me. I know you stole the idea with the R from something that has been posted here before! :D But that's not the point, I think the text is too bold and the effect on it is too strong. I think it would look better with a weaker effect with longer motion blur. And the Deep Blue is a bit hard to read, you could just lower the opacity for the motion blur layer or something, it's not that important to have tons of effects on that. The fonts are nice though, and so is the border. Keep it up. :)

yeah... its stole from jaWk's Alexandria (yuo WILL have seen on dA :P)

i really hate the text... i mgiht change... but atm i cant really b bothered - only if i put on mah dA

Nice. I love the text actually, the origin text at least. The border is a little big and theres too much space for a fractal. I see you tried the vertical thing like in alexandria as well, sorry but it doesnt really work with a fractal. Nice job on the fractal, looks nice but a little sloppy. The colors are nice but theres almost too many :-\. Still a nice job. Keep it up.

yeah, when i made the fractal, it was width (whihc i love) and ive been doing length on my brushings, so i tohught id try it

oh and i HATE square, it ruins it - so it was either length or width, with the text to the right, i chose right

version 1.1

http://pix7.com/0505/3046z_origin.jpg

wow!

i really like this replay man,,, the borders are nice it gives a nice touch with the really thick borders,,, the render it self is also really nice! i like the circules in the middle u know,, also the whole shape of the pic is nice :D,,, good job!

8.9/10

thanks man, if ya hadnt noticed, i often do borders like that on my stuff :D

hmm i liked it with deep blue text in it, just not crazy about the bluring... i don't know how it should be done, it just looks too much.

over all its brillantly compiled, i love that style of thang.

try that light orange in teh circle with a greenish orange blurr effect

nice update. The only problem is the render has a bit too much "dust" on it. Theres a setting you can change to get rid of that, it may be gamma. its under the render settings.