illidan

http://i49.tinypic.com/25i6i36.jpg
v2.
http://i46.tinypic.com/2jad9n5.jpg
v3.
http://i50.tinypic.com/ixtnvk.jpg
cnc please.

bumpiee no cnc?

I think its over-sharpened and the lighting is too bright that it caught my attention.
the fractal in front of the render doesn't blend well but the depth is cool.
I would suggest to add text because you are working on a huge canvass.

The light source doesn't fit with the sig, the whole sig is really dark but your light source is a bright greeny colour in the top of your sig. So the whole sig should be brighter because of that if you know what I mean.

made a v2. cnc please http://i46.tinypic.com/2jad9n5.jpg

The depth,and focal is good.However the green is little over powering,I'd put some light blue in there(maybe along the edges of the swords and on the symbols on the render).The c4d is alright but to me it seems a little on the sharp side(maybe tone that down a little).All in all it is a good attempt.

made a v3 with your tips ;)
http://i50.tinypic.com/ixtnvk.jpg

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Originally Posted by Lonnie

The depth,and focal is good.However the green is little over powering,I'd put some light blue in there(maybe along the edges of the swords and on the symbols on the render).The c4d is alright but to me it seems a little on the sharp side(maybe tone that down a little).All in all it is a good attempt.

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Most of what Lonnie said.