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what to add?
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bump, nothing??
try adding a light source. the smudged face is not that good. is it a black and white tag?
if not, maybe increase the saturation to add more color flow. keep it up
you need to bring more depth to it and yeah i agree with schultz, you need a light source.
I wouldn't smudge the face of a render/focal, could use some more flow, atm all you got is your smudging in that direction. Light source, without one it looks dull.
I think the smudging needs to be blended better. I definitely see what you were going after and I think the attempt is going nicely. Needs more contrast and stronger lighting. Keep at it!
