One of My First Sigs.

it is in my sig. :)

That a nice sig mate :)
Blending is awsome. Cool smudging.
I think the right side of the sig is too bright.
I would crop the sig up a bit.
The size is a bit weird so I would remove a piece of the right side ;)

The text needs work.
Make it a bit bigger and move it closer to your focal point.
If the text won't succeed, then just dont put text in it.

Effects are nice :)

GJ sky
Keep it up :D

This is really good for one of your first sigs, I was horrible when I first started and still aren't that good. :p

Its a bit wide though, not really proportional to the height but thats cool, it all depends on what you want. You've blended the focal with the bg well, I like this, its nice and simple, not over complicated or anything.

Wow, for one of your first signatures this is beastly. Good Job and the criticism I agree with CS4Pro on. Great job overall, though. Keep it up. =]

I agree with cs4. I think the lighting is too strong however, also I wouldn't put the source there. Work on your composition and contrast.

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Originally Posted by cs4pro

That a nice sig mate :)
Blending is awsome. Cool smudging.
I think the right side of the sig is too bright.
I would crop the sig up a bit.
The size is a bit weird so I would remove a piece of the right side ;)

The text needs work.
Make it a bit bigger and move it closer to your focal point.
If the text won't succeed, then just dont put text in it.

Effects are nice :)

GJ sky
Keep it up :D

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yeh i tried a few different texts,
but they all failed...lol.
so i just made it extremely simple.
thanks for the critiques!

Very nice for a first sig i deleted mine it was that bad xD i used to just crop and add text :P