Venom

CnC plz :)
http://i45.tinypic.com/34ep85h.png

Gues it has a flow-prob :p

It's got good depth and the text is nice.But it's seems a little confusing by the claw.

I understand that you try to create depth by blurring the hand but the background is also blurred wich makes it seem like it's in the back wich ... confuses me :s Edit: It does bring attention to the focal tho so I guess it's just my imagination...

add some more flow, its really good other then that :).

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Originally Posted by Aether

I understand that you try to create depth by blurring the hand but the background is also blurred wich makes it seem like it's in the back wich ... confuses me :s Edit: It does bring attention to the focal tho so I guess it's just my imagination...

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jup I understand that ;)
I did that because otherwise it will take the attention away from the focal idd.

Thnx for the CnC peepz :)

nice effects and depth, but im not liking the colors to much, they could be much more fitting and vibrant

The color scheme is nice but it is contrasted too much in some areas. Also the composition is some sort of fray of sorts which doesn't go down too well with me. I think the arrnagement of your effects need to be better. I like the text. The BG looks too dull for me as well. Blurring a BG won't achieve depth all the time. In this case it hasn't. Work on your lighting and contrast and composition. Especially lighting and contrast. Look at Dron's works to get what I mean. Keep at it!

haha Takken - my lighting and contrast still at practice stage, but thx ;p
not your best mate - text is too sharp and the claw in your left side kinda kills flow for me