Guitar Explosion

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Cn'C please! =)

Hmm looks half decent kind of low quality don't like the text and there is not alot of flow it looks like stock some blur in the background and slapped c4d some more colours and light sources and it can be a good tag oh yeah and work on the text..

Looks good the text aint to appealing to me, nice depth.

I'm not feeling the dots behind the person though.

Thanks for the critiques guys, I'll try to learn with this, and yeah, text ain't my best =/

Well you can easily learn by searching 'text tutorials'.

there are some great ones here mate, you should read the rule of the thirds which is a very good tutorial.

Sometimes I just leave the text out if I can't fit it in a nice place.

Hope you improve mate! :)

oversharpened and a little too bright on the hands, but damn i love it anyways :)

drop the text
very lq as said

Thanks for the critiques guys =)
I think I have to change the color of the text. xD

remove the text. Its positioning is too far away. I sort of see what you were aiming for. Try creating and positioning the effects more in the direction that the focal is facing. Work on the tones of color. Too harsh in some areas and there are some elements that look random. Work on the composition and color scheme. Keep at it!