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Could be a good one if you blended the c4d a bit more and put some effects on it :)
Good work (y)
The left hand side looks out of place and sticks out more than the render imo.
Remove or blend the c4d in on the left then should look slick.
The focal is placed way too much to the left. Also, text is not meant to be overwhelming. Only complimentary. That is something you have to work on! Simpler text or none at all. The colors could work if you implement more lighting and another color to work with. I like the elements but the positioning of them is poor and they lack blending. Work on composition and color. Keep at it!
