Halo tag

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...iverpool11.png

Still trying to incorporate c4ds into my old style and get the hang of them.

Remove the border and use standard borders please. Solid looking c4ds would do the focal better. The effects near its right arm look oversharpening and out of place and color seems wrong. Also the lighting needs work on. Elements on the left are ncie but try manipulating them better and fit the compo some more instead of having them "just there". I find the wireframes behind the fellow to be over sharpened as well. Use your resources better! Don't just incorporate c4ds expecting to get a cool result. Know which to pick and know which one doesn't go! Don't try slamming them all into one. It won't work. Work on composition! Keep at it!

The light source is to big if the signature was darker the whole focal with the c4ds would stand out much better and I am not too keen about the colours aswell... but not a bad try kind of got a good points and few bad points...

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Originally Posted by Takken

Remove the border and use standard borders please. Solid looking c4ds would do the focal better. The effects near its right arm look oversharpening and out of place and color seems wrong. Also the lighting needs work on. Elements on the left are ncie but try manipulating them better and fit the compo some more instead of having them "just there". I find the wireframes behind the fellow to be over sharpened as well. Use your resources better! Don't just incorporate c4ds expecting to get a cool result. Know which to pick and know which one doesn't go! Don't try slamming them all into one. It won't work. Work on composition! Keep at it!

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Alright thanks for the advice, I'v

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Originally Posted by Deosion

The light source is to big if the signature was darker the whole focal with the c4ds would stand out much better and I am not too keen about the colours aswell... but not a bad try kind of got a good points and few bad points...

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I'll go for a smaller one next time, thanks for the tips.

i like the colours you have used and the way the c4d's have too :D
although the sharpness i think it looks like XD is a bit overpowering for my taste very nice job mate :D

The background needs work and the tag needs more flow to it.
I see what you've tried to do with the c4ds but not executed well imo.

kiu

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Originally Posted by ACLWelsh

i like the colours you have used and the way the c4d's have too :D
although the sharpness i think it looks like XD is a bit overpowering for my taste very nice job mate :D

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Thanks, didn't notice how sharp it was before I uploaded it. :p

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Originally Posted by bcfcant

The background needs work and the tag needs more flow to it.
I see what you've tried to do with the c4ds but not executed well imo.

kiu

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Thanks for the advice. :)